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My First Manga Drawings

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  1. StarfletcherBANNED

    StarfletcherBANNED I can have whatever title I want
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    image.jpg If you guys could give me constructive criticism, tips and opinions it would help out a lot! I plan to do it on the computer when I get my graphic tablet, then make profile pictures for you guys!
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    That's really good! Although I'm not that good at drawing, here are some tips:
    1. Give the eyes more shape and detail
    2. Add more face expressions
    3. Try shading under the hair and so on, just draw a line and wipe it with your finger
    hope it helped
     
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    Thanks! I have been working on the eyes this morning and plan to do a version with more detail with the eyes tonight!
     
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    great work
     
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    Although I am not the greatest artist here is some ideas.
    1)Try to add a bit more facial expression.
    2)Maybe try to change the way the wind is blowing (hair going behind them)
    Cant think of any more its to perfect to do so.
     
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    Awwww, thanks. If I haven't already followed you, I will!
     
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    Thank you for following me,but seriously you would make a great artist if that was the path you followed.
     
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    The path I am following is graphic designer/graphic artist. I believe a knowledge of both GFX and Art would help me greatly in the future.
     
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    I agree. Knowing both will give you a better all round knowledge of the type you choose.
     
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    I personally don't draw manga/anime.
    But my feedback:
    The neck is wayyyyyyyy too long.
    The shoulders don't "slightly expand" from the neck. Aka: make the shoulders broader.
    Eyes don't freaking look like that unless you're trying to draw realistically.
    Is the nose in manga characters seriously a line?
    And the eyebrows on the second one don't look right.
     
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    I only started doing it it yesterday :p
    And the second one is the first drawing I did.
     
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    Nice paper. *
     
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    It's a wall? I don't see any wall in any of the pictures.
     
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    oh gawd

    dis scared me no joke.
    I got a bruise.
     
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    The third one is awesome as hell.
     
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    Thanks! I'm redoing that one now with better facial expressions.
     
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    he looks like a giraffe (the neck.)
    And the smile is just... ugh
     
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    Oh, ok :(
     
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    Nah, I probably couldn't do much better. Want me to try drawing "manga"?
     

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